読者です 読者をやめる 読者になる 読者になる

あと一日働いたら2週間休みだぜ

なんとなく暇なので、英語教育2.0というところで英語の先生の作った小説の冒頭をもう少し自然になるように書き直してみた。オープンソースですね。でもid:anfieldroadさんは熱心でよさそうな先生ですね。RSSで全文を送るようにしてくれればもっと良いんだけどな。

#1 HOMEWORK

  Tony Gonzarez is a junior high school student. He is 14 years old. His father is an English teacher in Japan. He lives in Japan with his family.

  One day, Tony tried to do his homework at home. He must finish making his Garakuta art by tomorrow. But he couldn't find his Garakuta art.

 "Maybe... I forgot it in my classroom."

 "What will Mr.Y say to me, if I forget it tomorrow...?"

  Now, it's ten o'clock at night. He is not sure that someone is at my junior high school now. But I must go to get it.

  He got out through the window of his room and he started to run. He left home without saying anything to his father and mother. Because they are very strict, they wouldn't say OK.

  He arrived at Suka Junior high school at 10:20. But there were no cars. And school was dark. He thought nobody was there. He was sad.

 "What should I do?" He said to himself.

  At that time, Tony found someone standing by him.


http://d.hatena.ne.jp/anfieldroad/20071220/p1

  Tony Gonzarez is a junior high school student. He is 14 years old. His father teaches English in Japan. So he lives in Japan with his family.

  One evening, Tony was about to work on his Garakuta art project for school. He had to finish his Garakuta art by tomorrow. But he couldn't find his artwork anywhere in his house.

 "Maybe I left it in my classroom."

 "What will Mr.Y say to me, if I don't have it with me tomorrow...?"

  It was ten o'clock at night. He was not sure if anybody was still at the school. But he felt he had to go to get it.

  He got out his room through the window and he started to run. He left home without saying anything to his father and mother. They are very strict, they wouldn't say OK to go out this late at night.

  It was twenty minutes past 10 when he arrived at Suka Junior high school. There was no car. The school building was all dark. He thought nobody was there. He felt helpless.

 "What am I gonna do?" He said to himself.

  At this second, Tony found someone standing right next to him.